I am joining the Summer Learning journey Project.
Today I was Listing all of the foods that I
would take with me while on a voyage on sea
it wouldn't contain foods that get stored in the refrigerator.
Your slideshow is really cool, the animations make it interesting to watch and the pictures add lots of visual details, setting up the idea of an ocean voyage nicely. Your food choices are nice and healthy (with some treats along the way) and lots of fresh water is definitely a really important addition.
Remember to read the whole activity carefully and answer all aspects of the questions. this activity asked you to also explain why you would choose each food item. you've got good ideas hear so going back and explaining why shouldn't be too hard.
(Quick side note, please try to attribute your images by adding a link or writing where you got any pictures you grab off the internet. For an example, have a look at how the SLJ team have done this around each image on the activities page. This won't cost you points, but it is really good internet practise for the future.)
Talofa Jamie-lee,
ReplyDeleteYour slideshow is really cool, the animations make it interesting to watch and the pictures add lots of visual details, setting up the idea of an ocean voyage nicely. Your food choices are nice and healthy (with some treats along the way) and lots of fresh water is definitely a really important addition.
Remember to read the whole activity carefully and answer all aspects of the questions. this activity asked you to also explain why you would choose each food item. you've got good ideas hear so going back and explaining why shouldn't be too hard.
(Quick side note, please try to attribute your images by adding a link or writing where you got any pictures you grab off the internet. For an example, have a look at how the SLJ team have done this around each image on the activities page. This won't cost you points, but it is really good internet practise for the future.)
Daniel :)
Thanks for the helpful feedback and I would take all of the constructive feedback in good use. Thanks Jamie-Lee
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